I don't know what to blog about so I figure to share a poem/ryhme I wrote:
I Might Be Broke Now/But Watch When My Money Up
See I want Ice like a Popsicle,
And being from where I'm from, I have been though some obstacles
But that isn't stopping me, Losing isn't optional
So if you get in my way, you'll get split like an optimal(blunt)
See getting money is what I GOT to do
By any means necessary, even if I and have to pop the tool(gun)
I want asparagus and lobster food
And right now I'm eating Top Ramen, so I got a lot to do
I'm tryna wipe my ass with my cash;)
Have it overflowing like when you leave a plug in the bath
You could laugh, I love hate
And if you ain't talking bout money we can't conversate
I don't have time for games, I have a strong team
If plotting on getting us, well then your think about the wrong thing
Im tryna get my money up, You could do that funny stuff
Ima keep eating until my tummy stuffed.

Gabriel--You are improving your content. Good. Keep it up. Make sure you are always working to interest your audience with your thoughts and ideas. Work on breaking your writing up so you don't just have 1 big block of text for each entry. Keep digging and analyzing.
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